Wednesday, November 23, 2011
Should we continue blogging?
Miss Lees asked us if we should continue blogging with other projects. Blogger did help us problem solve such as my router problem, but some groups got "lazy" and did not post there writings so there peers could not complete their homework by commenting. Though there are many pros to blogging I strongly disagree with some of my peers that we should continue blogging. There were too many technical issues involved with blogger and some students got easily distracted with other forms of media while on the computer. I think we should just do it the old-fashioned way and write our work.
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Sean you may have a valid opinion here but you are not supporting it well - For example, structurally this paragraph seems to address too many ideas for one paragraph and not enough explanation / support for the different ideas. More effort and thoght is required for this response. I think if you spent more time on this it would make your argument more effective and demonstrate your writing skill better.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Ms. Lees in saying that you raise a valid point-work habits (or lack thereof) greatly inhibit our ability to complete our homework.
ReplyDeleteHowever, you need to substantiate your claims with more evidence. Again, as Ms. Lees said, it would help to provide a multi-paragraph response so that you can provide more content for each of your ideas.
If you use more effort to strengthen your argument, your writing would turn out better. Keep up the work!